My family members

[Thanaporn Kaewpichai]

Hello, I'm Thanaporn Kaewpichai, I'm going to talk about my family member routines, My family has 4 members which are My mom, My dad, My brother and me. Every day in the morning My mom usually get up at 5 a.m. and she'll do the breakfast for me and my brother then when we go to School she will do the house work and after school she'll come to pick me and my brother up from school. My dad sometimes gets up at 6 a.m. but sometimes if he go to bed late at night, in the morning he'll get up at about 6:30 a.m. and then he'll go to his work place to do the work and he'll get home at 7 p.m. On the weekday Me and My brother always get up at 5:30 a.m. and have a breakfast then go to school but On the weekend we usually get up at around 8 to 9 a.m. On Saturday my brother has an electone class at the shopping mall, so our family has to go to Fashion Island shopping mall every Saturday. Our family usually go to bed at 10 p.m. on the weekday and 11 p.m. on the weekend sometimes.
Thanks for reading. ʕ￫ᴥ￩ʔ

Thanaporn Kaewpichai m.3/3 no.20

[Teacher Daniel]

Endings -s, you sometimes forget about it.

Not bad but too many repetitions.
Write more about daily activities.

Points granted for homework:3/5