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harid jaisupap number 15

Post by Harid jaisupap on Fri May 18, 2018 5:53 pm

I wont to visit Japan because i like harry potter so much so i wont to go the Wizarding world of harry potter in Universal Studios Japan and i like to eat Japanese food such  as sushi , ramen.

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Re: harid jaisupap number 15

Post by Teacher Daniel on Sun May 20, 2018 6:41 pm

"want", not "wont"

Everything looks good, but it's kinda too short and there is no photo.

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