My family routine(thaya protacio)

[thaya protacio]

Hi teacher daniel,name is thaya protacio im number 16 class 2/4,i have 4 members in my family. The first member is my mom she is a very disapline person. The second member of the family is my dad he is a very responsible person, he works very hard and the last member is my sister she is 10 years old she is cute and etc.
The things that i do every day is eating sleeping playing vidio game or watching korean boy band but....i normaly just sleep. Acually my daily life kinda "boring" that is why i dont have that much stories to tell so..i think thats it for today i will tell you more stories of my life thank you.

[Teacher Daniel]

Looks good, but it's too short.
Please work more on what each member does every day.

Points granted for homework:2/5