My family member

[Sarisasiri Chankong]

Hi! My name is Earl I’m going to write about my family member routine.In weekday my dad and my mom ther will wake up at 5:30 am then my dad go downstairs to cook my breakfast and my mom is take a bath and then mom wake me up at 6:20 am.I go take a bath about 10 minutes and then my brother will take a bath next to me.I prepare for go to school about 30 minutes and then my dad will take me to school I’m at school 7:40 am.When I’m finish study I take the bus to home my brother at home before me because his school is near to our house.My mom back home at 6:00 pm and my dad back home at 7:00 pm and we have lunch at 8:00 pm.
Thank you!

Sarisasiri Chankong (Earl) m3/3 no28

[Teacher Daniel]

endings -s with he/she/it
come back home at 6.00pm

Not bad but write more, please. Thanks

Points granted for homework:2/5