My first times in Japan

[methapon]

Every year My dad company will Take all workers to another county for vacation.
My first time in Japan when I was 10 years old.I go there in winter and It was first time that I saw a snow and I play it.
In Japan has a many awesome things and has many thing to do there.And it was first ski in my life. It very fun. I falling many times but i don't get hurt because it was snow.
I went to Tokyo tower. It very high and up there it shake all the times by wind. I very scary to fall down.
I went to toy store i buy a one piece and gundam .
It was My fun and First time in japan.

Methapon Khunapo M.2/3 no.13

[Teacher Daniel]

Nice one but it looks more like a story than a diary ;d but it's still good. I will accept it.

Points granted for diary :8/10