Bhurida Sukkree

[Bhurida sukkree]

Monday 21 May ‘18
Today, I watch football with my brother . I like to search a football team and football player because I interested about football But, When I was young I don’t understand why my brother likes to watch because I do not know how to watch it. After that, someone made me curious.So,I searched for myself. It was fun but I still do not know the rules of football. I try to consult my brother and I think ladies watch football is very cool. After I found the information for a while. I found the team I liked. It’s Chelsea F.C .It’s a team that my brother cheered alike. I was teased with this player, he is Eden Hazard. He plays the striker and he is a good player. Chelsea is one of the defenders in England. Each team will have 23 players. But in match Coach will pick 11 players to play with another team. They called it a “lineup” and Coach can change 3 player in the match. They called it a “backup”. I started watching football last year. I watched with my brother but some match it’s very late, I went to sleep first. On 23.00pm., It will be a new football match Chelsea vs Manchester United it a FA cup. Any team won will receive a trophy. The team I cheered to win. It’s really wining in 1-0. Now it’s very late, I’ll have to sleep next time I’ll tell you the new story. Goodnight

[Teacher Daniel]

Too many "will". Instead of that, we just normally use verb. But it's a good job.
Well done. Keep it up

Points granted for diary: 8/10