My family members

[Naphat Lamlertluksanachai]

Hello, My name is Naphat Lamlertluksanachai. In my family there are 4 people, My father, My mother, My older brother and I. My older brother is older than me 12 years old, He works in Bangkok. My father works at Rayong, He job is about chemical, He did not come back home everyday, He will come back every weekend. My mother is  a seller, She sell about ice-cream .This is My Family, Thank you.

EP-Naphat Lamlertluksanahai M.3/3 No.18

[Teacher Daniel]

Good but too short.
Write more next time, please.

Points granted for homework:2/5