Diary Today

[Naphat Homhuan]

Today , I woke up at 6.30am I got up from the bed and walk straight to the bathroom. I brush my teeth first and then went to shower and get dress. I went to school by a car and ate breakfast in the car. Arrived at School about 7.20-7.30am.
When I arrived I went up to my classroom and  then came down to the morning thing then went back to classroom at 8.20am.  In a lunch break, I went down to get my lunch get some drinks (My favorite dish is noodle). After I finish all that then I went up to classroom at 12.30pm. Today I recess at 4.00pm. I went home at 4.20pm when I arrived  the first thing I did is turn on my computer and play games with my friends. I usually ate my dinner at 18.50pm then I get back to the game. I went up to my room about 20.30pm then I toke a shower watched some youtube vids then I went to sleep. This is my dairy of today

Naphat Homhuan 3/3 no.4

[Teacher Daniel]

Good. Try to use some emotions, feelings, adjectives to make it more beautiful.

Points granted for diary :8/10