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Dairy on Friday 1/6/2018
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Dairy on Friday 1/6/2018
Hello teacher Daniel my name is Thanakrit Chadcharoen M.3/3 No.7, in this post I'm going to tell about what I have done today. Last night I set my alarm at 5.00 am, 5.30 am because I am very lazy to get up early, I feel I love my bed, it is very soft and make me feel good when I lay down. After I had finished my dress up I went down, open refrigerator and pick up my breakfast. My story in the morning mostly same every day except in the Saturday and Sunday, so I will cut story to when I was arrive school. I had played basketball at 7.00 am to 7.40 am then I went to get in attend line. I just look at myself that I very wet and dirty but I can’t did anything because I scare that if I run in to the toilet I must be punish by teacher, So before I go to my class I bought a new shirt for today and next time. When I was in my class I remember that I had forgotten that I didn’t do my homework last night so I start to do. After finished class in the morning I go down to have lunch with my friend, today I had bought noodle and then! I turn left and crashed with a friend. I had to said that I very sorry, I walked to a desk, sit down and eat all noodle. I feel very bad but not at all because after I had eaten finished I went to keep my bowl and crashed! I thought that if I buy water in canteen I will crash again so I went to the opposite store and buy a bottle of water when I was going out I crashed to the door and car. I had walked up to my room and crashed to the door. After I went out school I had laughed to myself and thought that today is a day that unlucky.
I have to go to bed now, I am feeling try.
Goodnight
I have to go to bed now, I am feeling try.
Goodnight
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Re: Dairy on Friday 1/6/2018
too many unnecessary Past Perfect Tenses. Be careful about this.
Looks good. Keep going
Points granted for diary :8/10
Looks good. Keep going
Points granted for diary :8/10
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