Pattaranan Promyu

[Pattaranan Promyu]

18/5/2018
Today,my mom told me to go to my uncle house.I mean my uncle music academy.My uncle and my aunt,they are stay in Chiangmai for 2 days.My church have workship concert there so my uncle need to go there because he can play guitar.I look at the clock after my mom told me and it’s 06:40am.I and my mom took taxi to go to school. At 07:10 am.I am at the school.After an assembly line,I told my friend to gave the gift that,I bought for my little sorority(Maisom 1/4). At 05:00pm.I took bus to go my uncle house with my friends.At 07:00pm.I am at my uncle house.I played with my dogs,their names are Coco and Tour yai(Rasty).After that,I had dinner with my mom and go to bath.At 09:30pm.I go to slept.Hannah singnature

[Teacher Daniel]

Good job but it's definitely too short. We need to describe more days as well.
Don't forget about it.

Points granted for diary: 5/10